Daniel Brown

Good stuff. It kept me hooked; I liked the two characters and more so their rather amusing relationship, I liked the idea behind Death's brother, in actual fact, I liked ...

I enjoyed this. However, I sincerely hope that there is more, and it has some sort of plot/storyline because this has potential to be an extremely good 'comical sci-fi'. I ...

Another good post :) Well done. However, there are a few things. Again, again, again- description of the setting ! It's something that this needs . Don't get me wrong, ...

First Impressions -Too short, but you did say it is incomplete. -Not paragraphed, no structure. Reading the first few lines -Sentences too long, and there are no commas, why not? ...

Love it :D - It's clever - It's well thought out - It's well described - It's well set out The line towards the end, "He would spend the rest ...

Woo! :D Me gusta! Me gusta! Pienso que el poem es fantastico! :D Yes, I'm English so my spanish may not be entirely correct, however, I am learning it :D ...

I loved it. In fact, I have given it a golden star (and that takes alot from the likes of myself!) Anyhow, this intro/extract of your story is quite amazing, ...